Sunday, June 14, 2009

love'em

I love staring at the beautiful moon while sitting on the fine sand 
now, it is setting in front of my eyes
afraid it will disappear with a blink of an eye

4 comments:

the walking man said...

Eyes that are afraid to blink
miss much
because of the fear
not the moment they are closed.
TWM





You have a very creative blog going here. Stop on by The Walking Man if you've nothing better to do sometime.

¿dELiÃ? said...

alright i will definitely check out your blog!

what is TWM?

the walking man said...

The Walking Man (TWM) is a sculpture by Rodin in it's first inception and a name given me thirty odd years ago as I walked around America for a few years.

I now use it as the title of the blog where I post all of my original writing. Poetry mostly because I don't see much need to rant and rave about things.

You have a style of poetry going here that I am quite fond of, a minimalism that I like to call "short line" poetry because of the brevity of words used to convey the image.

Longer than Haiku but less rigidly structured in format.

You have a talent here, now grow it.

This is a site I like where Tara is one of the finest short line poets I know:

http://breathebeautiful.blogspot.com/

Be Well.

¿dELiÃ? said...

thanks !
= )